purpose

Tanka

love is sufficient

sensible explanation

gift of creation

wonderful reason of God

we have breath of life    

            

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Good!

[Helena]

Beautifully descriptive, creative and a wonderful submission to Sal's Tanka contest.

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amen..breath of fresh air

[Ed Hart]

alpha and omega

[Wondering Mind]

A great Tanka, my friend. Opening and ending are stories in their own right

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. wow!!! ... the line "we have breath of life" is particularly amazing ...