Sickness

Sickness

A Poem by moonlight
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"Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things, and no good thing ever dies." ~Shawshank Redemption

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Life gives you reason to curse it
Call it unfair
When it tells you
That your reality ain't colorful
But dull and gray
How you deal with it
Will be your own
But
I hope you'd still try
To look for those specks of color
Out of those dull gray tones

© 2011 moonlight


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A poem of hope, and lord knows I need a bit more of that these days. Its stopping to smell the roses, finding the perks in any bad situation...trying to find the good in people no matter how far deep you have to search for it. Such truth within this piece. Going into my favorites as a subtle reminder to find the specks of color within my life whenever its in turmoil. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A poem of hope, and lord knows I need a bit more of that these days. Its stopping to smell the roses, finding the perks in any bad situation...trying to find the good in people no matter how far deep you have to search for it. Such truth within this piece. Going into my favorites as a subtle reminder to find the specks of color within my life whenever its in turmoil. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written...well done. Vivid and real.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with the last review. To me, its kinda saying, try to find the good things out of all of the bad.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the message in this; very positive, vibrant and uplifiting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cebu, Philippines



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