Closure

The end of a memorable week...

Sadness in my heart

that it had to end

the lust now fading

the ache has dimmed

whispers of your memory

slide across my skin

I opened my soul

and let you crawl in

now it's time to let go

and let this all end

because it's a mistake

to let you in again.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

Wow. Although this was short it was very beautiful and you definitly got your point across in very few words.
My favorite part was :
"whispers of your memory

slide across my skin

I opened my soul

and let you crawl in"

[Catastrophe]

beautifully written, 12 lines tell the whole story, truly beautiful
"the lust now fading

the ache has dimmed

whispers of your memory

slide across my skin"

my favorite lines; the emotion is right there...nice ^_^

[Emza S]

Wow, great job. I'm really starting to like your writing, so keep on doing what you're doing. You must be doing something right. Have fun!

[Komichi]

I know the feeling!!!

[Dalaina Renee]

Wow, good work!