She's Gonna Fly

You know her about as well

As she knows herself,

Which isn't really at all.

She's just a broken puzzle

A few pieces away from 

Reparable. 

She doesn't care though

She doesn't give a f**k

Anymore that she's unhappy.

With already broken fingers

And screams through clenched teeth

She's clinging onto life

With the small ability

To go. 

She knows she has flaws

And she doesn't embrace them

But it won't matter when she's started over.

And just before she breaks herself

She's going to make herself

Into the quite new, 

Interesting self

She's always wanted to be.

With a mockingbird's ballad

As the score of her life

She's starting as someone new.

Someone she can love,

The girl she's always wanted to be

And she's never been more excited

To just get up and leave.

She's got a while to go

But her bags are already full

So brace yourself, 

Because soon,

She's gonna fly.

Reviews

[Crow]

The feelings of an unsettled, perhaps lonely, even somewhat angry soul seem to be crying out in the wonderfully imaginative piece. The fine line between human reality and a desire for fantasy are seemingly there, regardless hope does exist through this piece.

Extremely heartfelt, well done.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Fly free always ; )

[Ben Taylor]

A few grammatical mistakes; but very nice :)
This sounds like you are pre-college to me, lol.
"With a mockingbird's ballad
As the score of her life"
I love that line.
Well done. :)

[Hope]

:)

[BeatricePortinari.]

she'll fugging soar, darling.