Lost in the Darkness

   I'm lost in the darkness of my heart

I'm drowning in my pain

it feels as if I'm falling for all eternity

with no blood in my veins.

I'm lost forever in the darkness of my mind

with no one to find

wont you help me fight?

and pull me into the light.

i see the light off in the distance

but it's barely in existence

it pulls away,

there's just no way.

 

I'm being engulfed by the evil of the night

with no strength left to fight,

i am hated by most

from coast to coast

i dont know why

i wish i could die.

 

death doesn't seem so bad

i think i would be glad

for my fate is sealed

the devil made a deal.

i once known great happiness

but to know happiness you must know pain

pain is no game.

i gambled with fate and chose a path,

a path to devotion

with no emotion.

 

i am still lost in the darkness called life

life is like a kite,

you can only fly so high

before you must say bye.

some say life is delightful

i say it's frightful

however death is peaceful

so i am not afraid to die

for im afraid i must say goodbye.

 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

expressess despair and isolation. the imagery is dark and the person seems disturbed by their life. but death is not the answer. facing your demons will help to alleviate some pain.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

I love the imagery! Good Write! I love it.!

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Powerful and cathartic!