Waves

Waves slip along the sand

I feel your hand against my skin

Sapphires blaze

I feel the stars falling

Spiraling and dancing

In your embrace

                         I melt into the waves

Reviews

[GTVile]

Very good. Its soft and delicate and beautiful. Like a fragile balance between meaning and metaphor. Very eloquently written.

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"Sapphires blaze
I feel the stars falling
Spiraling and dancing
In your embrace"
gee--what great lines in this piece!!!:-)
i love this---" I melt into the waves"--Perfect:-)
great poetry!!!;-)

james:-)

[Tim]

Nicely told, you've given us a moment of joy and passion in just a few words. The goal of every poet. Good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. The ocean can create hope and passion. Your description and story was amazing. The last line made the poem complete and outstanding.
Coyote