Thoughts of You and Me

Thoughts of You and Me

 

I’ve painted the ;picture of you and me over and over again

You’re occupying the most tender parts of my mind

I want to bathe in your essence

I want to move right through you

And keep the pieces of you all to myself

I’m drowning in thoughts of you

They won’t let me be

How can I describe my love for you

How can I make you see

I always want to be around you

Just you and me

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This will open his eyes and he will see how much you really care. THe last four lines says it all its loud and clear he must be a dear.

[audrie]

Thanks for the thoughtful review!

[Ranger Kessel]

loved it. again anyone can relate to this. thanks, I am glad i stopped to read this.:)

[audrie]

thanks for reading this and thanks for the review

[Maskedthoughts]

I really relate to this, its such a good poem. Good use of imagery too! Great write!

[audrie]

Thanks for the review!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

confessional style profession of love...sincerity shines through in this piece.

[audrie]

I appreciate your comment

[Saddam]

I always want to be around you
Just you and me.

Truelly passion of love dear. I am also think for my love, alone- hand in hand- head on soulder. Great imaginary poem dear. Hope that come true soon.

[audrie]

I thank you for the comment - No, I don't have that now but I haven't given up hope! : }