Stopped dreaming

Stopped dreaming

A Poem by Daniel Fourie

I've stopped dreaming
Dreaming that maybe there could be the slightest chance

But you've made it quite apparent, that
No matter what I say
No matter what I do

It will never be enough

And now I must do the impossible and forget about you
I don't think it can be done

So I will be stuck in this unrequited love sphere
Till I myself
See the sun

© 2013 Daniel Fourie


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"Stopped dreaming" what a great tittle, i do agree with your words, we have to stop seeing dreams/visions to be a successful one.. we've to do struggle in our this life to build onself better one to be a successful by putting our efforts, work, shifts and our time....
your this write's real and i wanna compare this write for those who live in dreams and are escaping from their real life...
Keep writing and posting such a nice pieces!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Stopped dreaming" what a great tittle, i do agree with your words, we have to stop seeing dreams/visions to be a successful one.. we've to do struggle in our this life to build onself better one to be a successful by putting our efforts, work, shifts and our time....
your this write's real and i wanna compare this write for those who live in dreams and are escaping from their real life...
Keep writing and posting such a nice pieces!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daniel Fourie
Daniel Fourie

Port Elizabeth, Eastern Cape, South Africa



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20. South Africa. Male Teenager. Music. Pop Punk. Rubik's Cube. Chess. Cricket. Soccer. and most importantly JESUS. more..

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