Words that fade

Words that fade

A Poem by Daniel Fourie

Tried to hold you for so long
but all I got was the saddest song

So I decided to leave you behind
all for you, to change your mind

Drifting away you said nay
Now's the time I guess I'll stay

North to south, east to west
You really are the very best

Confused though, still in a hype
I guess I'll sit here, near my mic
Wait and wonder
In pain and ponder
Writing away my words that fade

© 2014 Daniel Fourie


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I like the title and end line that echoes the title but the rest is a little clichéd and you may be sacrificing meaning to rhyme.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Daniel Fourie
Daniel Fourie

Port Elizabeth, Eastern Cape, South Africa



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20. South Africa. Male Teenager. Music. Pop Punk. Rubik's Cube. Chess. Cricket. Soccer. and most importantly JESUS. more..

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