Twenty

At twenty, guard your heart 

   at maximum security..

   let not yourself believe 

   the world's beauty it brings you

   for it is only deceiving you.

At twenty, guard your heart

   not to fall inlove 

   not to fall with earthly things

   for it will only harm you 

   and brings you trouble

   making you die in guilt

   and bury yourself to die in regrets.

          -Twenty-

  by: Fate

August 17, 2015

  9:46 PM

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

I love this poem hun, it's really insightful and beautiful. I agree with AaronFreitas that I wish someone had told me this when I was 20 also! Beautiful job hun :D

[Fate]

thanks a lot ! :) I really did appreciate your review..

[AaronFreitas]

I wish someone would have told me that when I was 20 lol... I love your words my friend :)

[Fate]

if there's no one told you that when you are 20, then I think sir you must tell someone you know who is 20 by now or someone turning 20 :)

thanks for the review sir :)