Butterfly Effect

For my sister's birthday. Rest in Peace lovely Lee x

Butterfly Effect~~

You can't flutter by 

     and not affect everyone you've touched

   heart of gold wrapped 

    in thinly veiled wings of strength

we've gazed upon your flight

        right from the beginning

days of storms have grounded,

      slowed your onward flight

yet, so beautifully you've risen

          above the ashen earth

bound for skies of brilliance

      free from ambivalence

overcoming to wash away the pain

           with each new storm

what awaits is still a mystery 

         to all of those who believe

whispering tomorrows linger

           on a zephyr quietly awaiting

~you can't flutterby and not affect everyone you've touched~

Reviews

[s y e]

This is so sad but wow, such a beautiful to such an amazing lady. I know she's proud of you, she's your we Angel in heaven watching you grow up to be an amazing woman like we all know you are. xo

[Cassie]

wow!!!!! I missed this one, another piece full of wisdom, I told you that brain of yours has so so much and your pen too, just like i told jack, may your pen never depart from you.

[Cassie]

I had not seen this was for your sister, ohh this is such a nice sweet teaching birthday message, may she always rest in peace

[Frieda P]

Thanks Cassie, glad you enjoyed, this is one of my favorites for Lee. x

[Lyn Anderson]

An ache, a longing, grief, forgiveness, and hope. So much emotion in such a tight space. This one is it, for me.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, this one is special to me, glad you enjoyed it.

[NeiL ArandA]

I have s movie with same title where a guy has this special gift to go back where of all started to correct and rewrite history gone wrong .

[Frieda P]

Will have to check that out Neil, thanks.

[MikeV]

Such a beautiful poem for your sister :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mike, glad you dug this one up, I needed to read it today. :-)

[MikeV]

You are very welcome :) i had no idea you had so many poems!
I look forward to reading more :)

[Frieda P]

Apparently I have a lot to say, haha, me and my big mouth ;-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks hun, truly appreciate you Sye. xo

[Lover Of Words]

a very good message!!!!!!!!

[Frieda P]

Thank you, much appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

There is a good message in these lines.