Tabasco Sauce of Life

The Tabasco sauce of life is the best spice

all jacked up on hot and heavy, spicy flavor

life's longing for the temptress of thrill

passionate lovemaking, plunging into the deep

first time glow that makes the heart flutter

taking that leap of faith off mount ecstasy

leaves those burning sensations to tickle

lingering after the fluster of prime impact fades 

Author's Note

Inspired after a conversation with someone on WC...ha, not that way!

Reviews

[DrD]

When a woman compares her emotional dimensions to Tabasco sauce, something's definitely amiss. My emotions range more into the tartar sauce range and sometimes accelerating to apple sauce. But it was fun reading even though I am far too innocent to understand it all.

[Frieda P]

You're gonna tell me Myrna doesn't like a kick every now and then doc? ;)

[DrD]

Yeah, she told me. I sent her for karate lessons.

[Frieda P]

;-) have I told you how cute you are doc? Don't let Myrna read this....

[DrD]

Cute? Cute? Baby raccoons are cute. Was Robert Redford cute?

[Frieda P]

Did you really want me to embarress you in this public forum? :-P

[DrD]

Did you ever mail a package to Tom Jones?

[Frieda P]

OMG I just threw up in my mouth, my mother used to listen to Sex Bomb....and he'd gyrate his hips and she acted daft, I wanted to run into heavy traffic lol

[DrD]

Maybe so, but he had a collection of more than 6,000 panties women mailed him from all ove rthe world. That didn't count the ones he collected that came filled.

[Frieda P]

PLEASE STOP, if one of those belonged to my mother, I'm finding a cliff....!!

[J. J. Nightingale]

I attended all of Tom Jones shows in Vegas .. kissed him .. but never threw my knickers !

[DrD]

Kissed him, 'eh? Now we know. Your mother had good taste, thousands of women would vouch for that.

[LA Lorena]

I think he was pretty hot in his time! (Even though I was just a kid) I know my Mom and her sisters loved him!

[J. J. Nightingale]

lol .. He is 72 now .. and he still "HAS IT" ! ..

[LA Lorena]

he does!!!!!

[Frieda P]

It's probably now in the same place as it used to be.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Lol ... :) .....

[Frieda P]

:) that was supposed to be 'NOT' but I take it you got it! .....

[KeeD]

It's safe to assume Tom Jones now has my underwear as well. I really did feel like a sex bomb every time I did the love shack dance to his song.

[Frieda P]

How did I miss this, Tom Jones, seriously, old swivel hips?

[kelvin]

Hot sauce yes life can filled with thrills and spills the excitement of being with love one intimately and among other things in life but to some the excitement tends to start turning less intense and start to fade. or you could just be talking about hot sauce hahaha good read here very creative I hear creative people tend to do creative things lol.

[Frieda P]

BHAHAHAAHA...you cheeky thing you....

[kelvin]

Hahahaha i hear ya

[Clockwork]

Well i never though of the essence of life in terms of hot sauce, but it did make me think. There is this spicy essence of things out there and here we are in the middle of life, and we are in charge of choosing our flavors. This seems like quite a good one to choose. You know, very exiting and lively and all.

[Emily]

This is playful, yet intense! I don't think I'll ever look at hot sauce the same way again! This piece will leave a lasting impression...
I like how you created such an unusual yet perfect allegory for one of the stronger emotions in life.
It boarders on being too sensual for me, but somehow the tie in to the literal hotness of the tabasco keeps it grounded just enough. I can still feel the sizzle...

[Frieda P]

I have no idea what you're talking about, it's about 'hot sauce' ;-)

[Emily]

Oh, my mistake... ;)

[Frieda P]

No problem ;P

thanks...

[Relic]

There's nothing like plunging into the deep and those spicy flavors. Nice poem and vist to mount ecstacy. Yum.

[Frieda P]

Now you just made it dirty! ;)

[Relic]

I do that sometimes. :D

[LA Lorena]

he does it often! ;)

[Relic]

No I don't. haha

[Sheila Kline]

A dash of tabasco sauce, a few sprinkles of chilli powder, a shake of cayenne pepper all added to a plate of desire, and the result is a flaming portion of "Oooh la la", followed by a desert of YOWZA,....all on a menu of "Sensual Delights"....oh, I like this!
I would say you took the thought and burned the kitchen down with it!!!...lol
I invite you to check out two of my stories about cooking up some fun....

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wvhillbilly47/463755/
An Extra Measure of Love - Part I

and

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wvhillbilly47/465277/
An Extra Measure of Love II....(Special Ingredients Added)

Keep up the "HOT" writing!!

[Frieda P]

You gotta tone down your reviews Shelia, you're upstaging my poetry! lol :-P

[Sheila Kline]

Dang, and I just thought I was being creative, and a naughty gal all in one....lol
Okay, I am staying tucked inside the recipe box!!

[kublakhan27]

Intense and hot in more ways than one...I can feel the crackles running through this^^

[Frieda P]

You felt them too eh? ;)
thanks...

[kublakhan27]

I did ;) No problem^^

[quinfinn]

gosh, i wonder who that might be....you did it! so, old bay seasoning wasn't enough spice for you huh? seriously though, this is a very clever and well worded write. well done (no pun intended)

[Frieda P]

haha I had fun with it, glad you approve ;-)
You have to watch what you say with me...ha

[quinfinn]

hmm, this could prove interesting