First Breath

New Life, New Year Senryu ....

A newborn baby cries

The circle of life unfolds

Angels take a bow

Reviews

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there's a poem from long ago about an angel for every blade of grass, leaning over whispering, "Grow..."
i am reminded of that, and it's nice.

[Frieda P]

Thanks jay, would love to find that one...

[Frieda P]

Angel

Every blade of grass
has its angel
bending over it,
whispering: grow, grow.*

And you, planted
on this planet,
trying to thrive,
what do you know, know?

Only a whisper of wings
spinning wind
through your ears
as you go, go.

*The Talmud

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the head's up, that's beautiful...

[Tex]

wow I am glad i read done the page that is very nice, thanks for finding that FP.

[Frieda P]

It's priceless isn't it Nick, love it.

[Tex]

:-)

[InsanityWriter]

I really like this one. (: Excellent job!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Insanity.

[MystiqFairy]

Short but beautiful!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly.

[quinfinn]

clever and sweet, that's a wrap!

[Frieda P]

Sweet ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice

[Frieda P]

Thanks

[kublakhan27]

I really like this one ;)

[Frieda P]

Thanks, I kind of like this one too. :-)

[kublakhan27]

:)

[PP]

Awesome!

[Frieda P]

Thank you! Enjoy your New Year Tink! ;-)

[PP]

hahaha..Thanks Peter! Huh at least someone calls me Tink!

[Frieda P]

I'm a stickler for nicknames, now you're stuck with it! :D

[PP]

hahaha, forever from now I am Tink to Frieda...aye!

[luviva]

real good...... the immagery is so strong unfolding the essence, love, and happiness brought by a newborn.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, great pics aren't they? Have a great New Year!

[luviva]

u 2 my friend!

[Sheila Kline]

Lovely - words and picture!! I can almost hear the flutter of angel wings!!

[Frieda P]

Awh, that's so sweet, thanks, and Happy New Year!

[KeeD]

beautiful, this is one of the best Senryu's I've seen on here, bravo!

[Frieda P]

That's a great compliment Kee, thank you muchly my friend.