Night Enigma

Mystery surrounds her every move

secrets cut a path to her door

dancing mystique of a serpent

the night vamps her desires

secrecy of a siren's enigma

she lurks through your heart

peers into your soul's eye

steals your mind in time

passion and fury engulf

ecstasy blankets her whims

men are captured in her web 

enraptured by artful lust

the morning light

transforms her 

days are simple 
chalky residue

of her fantasy

she dons her

glasses

slips into  

her flats

adjusts

her vibe

and her soul

vaporizes

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

The image of the woman with the mask sets the proper tone for the write which clearly shows the contrast of one who is on fire at night, and then resting in the ashes as the light of morning dawns! She becomes another as the image of the butterfly so aptly portrays!
A very interesting write which reminds me of "The Three Faces of Eve"!

[Frieda P]

Ahhh, I forgot about that movie. Thanks Sheila.

[PP]

Both those characters are poles apart but packed in One!! Must be a right riot!

[Frieda P]

I think most people have dual personalities or they'd like to think of themselves as having some degree of mystery. We're all enigmas's lets face it, no one really knows the true us except ourselves.

[PP]

I have to agree with you on this one! Knowledge of one-self is the ultimate lesson learnt in life, otherwise life stays in darkness of some sort!

[Frieda P]

I wish I were as smart as you when I was your age, would have saved me a lot of grief! ;-)

[PP]

hahaha..you think so??

[Frieda P]

I know so.

[PP]

awww bless; thank you..Love Tink

[Frieda P]

hahaha you like it now eh? :-)

[PP]

I love it!! Absolutely xx

[Frieda P]

Good, cause I'm not sure how the heck to say your name! ;-)

[PP]

hahahaha don't blame you its complicated.everyone's the same with it! It is a Sanskrit name and means 'First' btw!

[Pax]

an enigma you are in your writes my friend.
great and beautiful!

[Frieda P]

Thank you kindly Pax, I see you've warmed up my friend.

[Pax]

a little my friend... happy new year to u!

[DIVYA]

The two sides of a beautiful woman! It could be me it could be you! She deserves both worlds.

[Frieda P]

One never knows, does one? ;-) Thanks Divya!

[DIVYA]

;)

[fiery-san]

I'm basically imagining a character akin to Eris, the Goddess of Chaos from the movie Sinbad, it fits her so well... and I like the little twist at the end... the magic returns with the moon. Good job. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Oh, I like that! Thanks so much :-)

[David Scott]

Ah... I knew that teacher was a sexy freak! The vapor lingers like a mist around the blue ridges and cool valleys of the forest... It is never gone.
Love this one dear!

[Frieda P]

Thanks David, you had her pegged eh? ;-)

[Ahmad Cox]

Very dreamy and engimatic. I liked it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahmad, it's something a little different for me, glad you like it.

[kublakhan27]

Ah I've had too many of these enigmatic nights haha I love this piece to death though...it might be my favourite in the Frieda catalog to date ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha why didn't you tell me, I could have consulted with you first! And, WoW thanks! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

LOL Well I had no idea you had something like this in the works ;)

[Frieda P]

Neither did I until earlier tonight, I'll let it slide this time ;-)

[kublakhan27]

;)

[LA Lorena]

Oh, I like this Frieda. It's like she is two creatures, two beings. No overlap of personalities, a female Jekkyl and Hyde! Very creative!

[Frieda P]

Thanks, you don't know how much I appreciate that coming from you. Hey, I had no choice after you kicked my butt. Had to get the creative juices flowing. How's it feel being a muse? ;-)

[LA Lorena]

Me a muse? I may be amusing, but a muse? Naww.