Buried Diddums

Graveyard is my soul

 wisps of mongrel dog tails

mangy mad dogs bite

yelping for their dinner

bottled southern comfort

slaughtered pigs feet

to soothe your diddums

fry poison mushrooms

an elixir of stinging nettle

it's never over til the end

there is no end in sight

swallow the worm whole

gag on worldly powers

spit it out and you die

kick the can

hide the bucket

first prize on the list

brain sick membranes

grey matters madness implode

bend over for a abrupt rise

eternity has been granted

Reviews

[Sid]

Didn't get it, feeling really dumb right now, it's interesting to read what with the great wording and the "mellow" imagery but could you please enlighten me O great one! Don't mind me too much, sleep deprived right now but don't want to sleep. I mean it's freakin' 3 am here and I want to go to the terrace and scream out, talk about insanity...damn I'm gonna stop talking now...interesting write btw!

[Frieda P]

Truthfully, I like your review better....it's actually a lot less insane! ;-)

[Sid]

:)

[Frieda P]

you don't want to know, believe me, still appreciate it muchly!! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol you're a fan of Illidan too

[Larry Dyson]

you make me smile...a lot!..

[Frieda P]

that's the nicest thing anybody's ever said to me! ;-D

[KeeD]

This reminds me of episodes from the twilight zone .. only when we're 6 feet under are we truly at peace. great write

[Frieda P]

Perhaps, who really knows that to be true...thanks Kee

[KeeD]

Umm got a shovel?:P I'll volunteer.. let's "experiment" some :P

[Frieda P]

Crap you're kinky! ;-)

[KeeD]

"bites lips" maybe? :)

[Frieda P]

ha call me.

[KeeD]

haha I can't believe you just said that :P omg lol you're cute.

[Frieda P]

wait....was that moi? I think there's a Sybil lurking in me somewhere! ;-P

[KeeD]

You are definitely my poetic prophetess

[Frieda P]

ha flatter and all that jazz ;-D

[Tarry Franck]

I liked the flow of it but can't quite understand where you are coming from ;) sorry darling.

[Frieda P]

That's fine Tarry, I have no clue myself most days! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

LOL

[InsanityWriter]

Very interesting. :) I loved your word choice. ^_^ Nice piece.

[Frieda P]

Grazie Skittles, much appreciated...

[Sheila Kline]

And it's all over - peace is finally found as this poor, wretched soul sinks into the ground! The line, "grey matters madness implode" - one can't even think of sanity again! What a price to pay for eternity!!

[Frieda P]

For sure Sheila, for sure...thanks!

[Kaylor Mason]

Sounds like a lot of home remedies I know . . . what the hell were our ancestors thinking?

[Frieda P]

hahaha, that made me actually laugh out loud.

[rnuff]

Wow such imagery in this write, like the pic, this is wonderful.

[Frieda P]

Glad you liked it Shorty, and to see you you didn't go.

[rnuff]

I"m leaving Friday, tho I dread it i have too, but taking a lap top.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Very dark a bit like a tribute to death and the grave. Nicely written.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Carolann, yes, very dark.

[Michael G.]

Well, this isn't a "I'll sit down with some Moose Track and the world will be just fine," is it? Call the fire department, the ambulance has crashed on the scene. Southern Comfort, AND the worm? That's gonna hurt later. And I used to love seeing that worm disappear.
Glad I'm not inside this train wreck. It even hurts to be an eyewitness.
I've got aspirin and the makings for bloody Mary's when you need one... and you will.
Oh the write... "insanely" good.

[Frieda P]

I'm 'insanely' grateful for this review, you are too clever my man. Yes please, a Bloody Mary, make my extra spicy!

[Michael G.]

I know that recipe very well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Humanity has become a menagerie. I think you expressed that with witty tongue and razor sharp intelligence.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Dale, like this review. ;-)