SEX on The Beach

Uncomfortable...

sex on the beach is sandy

next time, I'm on top

Author's Note

Enjoy the incredible sand art!

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

LOL --- memories! (grew up near the beach, Hwyd Beach...but weekends went to Ft. Lauderdale Strip with friends, in the late 80's/early 90's and that use to be one of my favorite drinks! "The Candy Store" -- feels so old now LOL!)

Very clever, sassy, humorous gem of a poem you have here, Frieda! Your poems are always nothing short of being...Brilliant! Pen on! 100 to 100 :)

[Frieda P]

Lol, I love that it took you back! woohoo! Mission accomplished here, my job is done. ;-)

[ms. barrie]

Haha! Yes it most definitely took me back....I read the title and said "Okay this I MUST read!"
read moreHaha! Yes it most definitely took me back....I read the title and said "Okay this I MUST read!"

Crazy times, then! Thank you for letting me go back on that ride!
Will review more sometime later, try to! ;) - xoox

[Frieda P]

I thought a bunch of people could/would relate to this one, I mean who hasn't? Unless there's no beaches around, it's a lure, thanks again!

[ms. barrie]

pleasure was all mine to read, Frieda! and beach is only nice at night in my opinion LOL! bathing suits are evil!!! so is sand rubbing against....skin :D -- what's "on top?" i can't remember LOL! Thanks for the laughs, Frieda, I needed them today :)

[Frieda P]

Ha! TMI...you know how this looks on the live feed! You're too funny!

[ms. barrie]

well I put the box on top of the table to be opened later. there, that's what i was talking about, I had to look that up on dictionary.com, you know my A.D.D. thing. Thank you, you're hilarious! Love the Picture as well for this poem :)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[KAOlmsted]

Holy cats, dude...that picture is amazing. Oh, and the Senryu, too ;-)

[Sheila Kline]

OMG, the sand art is incredible!! Wise choice for the next time!! That sand in the "crack" will do it every time - makes one want to start up the sand blaster.....woosh, woosh, gone!!

[Michael G.]

Good art
Good write
and I agree... better to wait until you get inside... or at least take along a blanket.

[Frieda P]

Ha everybody and their blankets....thanks Michael.

[David Scott]

I think the guy should just be glad he's getting to have sex on the beach... Ha.
Pick your position and go for it!
Art was cool too!

[Frieda P]

Very cool, I agree. Thanks David.

[N!LoC]

omg that looks real!!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the read N!LoC

[Emerald Seas]

Bring a blanket next time, woman! Lol - prevents that nasty rub-burn affect too! love the art work with this - very cool!

[Frieda P]

So I'm been told, thanks Sera! ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your poems say it as it is.....full of wit and absolutely hilarious Frieda.....

Yeah that blooming sand gets everywhere.... :o)

But I do love these sand sculptures mind you.....

[Frieda P]

ha love 'blooming sand'! Thanks, glad you enjoyed it... :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Lol. I did very much....... :o)

[rubie]

yes, sex on the beach IS sandy, but just think of how much fun it can be to wash it off in the ocean afterwards!!! :)

[Frieda P]

Well said from a joisey girl! ;-)

[Kaylor Mason]

That's quite a sculpture!

[Frieda P]

Yeah, the sculpture's not mine.

[Mary]

ha ha ha!!! I often see posts on my fb of people on the beach, implying deep romantic experiences, I say ouch! great haiku! great chuckle! amazing sand art ;-) .... OH SUMMER WHERE ART THOU?!?

[Frieda P]

Ha, your reaction made me laugh! True, it's more of the gritty stuff. Thanks so much Mary.