Kaleidoscope Hues

What color is your poetry

           does it start out perky pink,

             then turn murky blue

    do you tap out the hue by hand

sing song a rhyme

         are you coloring in the lines

         thinking outside the box

  the spectrum is so intense

       scribbles in pen,

  babbling in watercolors

strokes of genius

 in oils finest

each one a special

          tinted sneak peek

all the worlds a canvas

           for our point of view

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Love this - reminds me of my poem Inking Art. Writing allows us to express every aspect of ourselves - the personal, philosophical, bizarre, the what ifs, the what haves, the future, fantasy and every other possible topic. You posed the question - each of us answers it slightly differently - in our own voice and hue. Nice penning there, girl!

[Frieda P]

So true, each of us puts his/her own colors and personal stamp on each piece, I will have to check that one out. Thanks Sera.

[Adele]

very nice poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

In art the freer your mind the better your work will be. Even the sky should not be the limit in creating cause there is plenty of space beyond this planet.

[Frieda P]

And you're out there sweetie....sorry, couldn't resist, you know i lub ya! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I am out there alright, but not because of my writing :)

lub ya too

[Ken Simm.]

Always been interested in the theories of Emotional Colour. This adds new dimensions.

[Frieda P]

Me too...I find it interesting that red denotes 'rage' as well as 'love', thanks for your visit.

[Jack...]

Very nice and colorful Frieda. It does seem that we write in colors most of the time, and fortunately, most of us are not color blind.

Good one.

[Frieda P]

I certainly couldn't pick just one for you Jack...you've hit all the colors in the spectrum it seems.

[Jack...]

Except one...Orange...did you know that the word orange is the only word in the english language that nothing rhymes with?

[Frieda P]

Not true, sporange rhymes, but who uses that one? ;-)

[Jack...]

Oh yeah I forgot that word...that is where you line up all of your spores in a certain pattern. You sporange them.

[Frieda P]

Try rhyming silver, even though it ends in 'er', nothing sounds quite right with it...although i'd not put it past you to make it work!

[Jack...]

I may have to think about that one...

[Frieda P]

I see light bulb moments already...

[Coyote Poetry]

Every poem had a different color. I write on all four corners of emotion. I believe the writer decide what color is needed. A very interesting poem. I like poetry with questions and thoughts to ponder. You did. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

'Four corners of emotion' I like that John. Thanks so much.

[Annabelle Lee]

and here every color may exist brvo

[Frieda P]

WC is very colorful to say the least, thanks Annablelle.

[Debbie_Philly]

This is so clever.... what a wonderful way to look at this craft !! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Debbie, so glad you enjoyed this one.

[Lover Of Words]

Stunning

[Frieda P]

Grazie Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure

[kublakhan27]

Frieda, this is incredible...I don't know how you're writing these things so quickly :)

[Frieda P]

I think my therapist had a word for it, which escapes me right now, something about deranged madness ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha then it's brilliant madness ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha is that like the fine line? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha more like a thread ;P

[Frieda P]

hahahahaa so true, so true!

[Frieda P]

I've crossed over, did you notice? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

We're too much alike for me to notice haha ;)

[Frieda P]

Lol!!

[kublakhan27]

:)

[ms. barrie]

your words paint landscapes in depicting the magick of writing poetry, exquisitely, Frieda! another amazing poem, but i'm not surprised :) -- pen on!

[Frieda P]

Like the sound of that Barrie, I think we all write in colors and moods. Thanks for the great review my friend. ;-)

[ms. barrie]

The pleasure was all mine, Frieda!! I just write babble pretty much, ha! Though i do agree with you...P.s. You're quite welcome, my friend! :))

[Frieda P]

You pretty much hit all the spectrum's Barrie! ;-)

[ms. barrie]

lol :) - Take care YOU!

[Frieda P]

:-D

[ms. barrie]

:5 -- i don't know?!

[Frieda P]

wait...what? ;-P

[ms. barrie]

exactly what i said, I have no fckin' clue ha - ((hugs)))!

[Frieda P]

lol go to sleep!! ;-P

[Carolann Dowsett]

I love the feeling of this, like a work of art you speak in colours, painting a picture in the reader's mind.

[Frieda P]

I love it when someone gets a 'feel' for it, thanks so much Carolann.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome Frieda :)