Dictating Scars

Scars of the heart,

  not visible to the naked eye,

yet the deepest cuts of all

colorless jabs

 of careless lovers and friends

thoughtless gestures

         too often flung in anger & despair

parents stamp their children with

          loathsome signatures

flinging knives into their future,

sweethearts cheating with another

cutting numerous others,

friends who can't be trusted

    expose your deepest secrets

each inflicting multiple slices 

     fracturing the pulse's virtue

splintering a new fragment

to deaden the beat

               the road map of scars

 that lead from the heart...

a long, winding road

 no exits & no viable destiny 

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

This reminds me of the feelings i have when comes to the feeling of love i have people careless friends, careless lovers, so on and so forth... Maybe there part of the reason why i am the way i am. But as for this writen piece this is the most beautiful piece i have seen you do in a very long time although all your peices are beautiful in there own speical way but this one just Screams to me BEAUTY BEAUTY BEAUTY... Brillient write

[Frieda P]

Wow Kelsey, thanks.

[DIVYA]

"a long, winding road
no exits & no viable destiny" - You said it here yourself Frieda...thoughtless, loathsome, hurting, cheating they maybe but they are all we have and we have to put up with their human failings. We are bled by them yet we live for them. There is no other way to go...no exits!

Very touching!

[Frieda P]

'yet we live for them', so weird aren't we, as human beings us all...thanks Divya!

[DIVYA]

Yes Frieda. We are a funny species. :)