Dictating Scars

Dictating Scars

A Poem by Frieda P

Scars of the heart,
  not visible to the naked eye,
yet the deepest cuts of all
colorless jabs
 of careless lovers and friends
thoughtless gestures
         too often flung in anger & despair
parents stamp their children with
          loathsome signatures
flinging knives into their future,
sweethearts cheating with another
cutting numerous others,
friends who can't be trusted
    expose your deepest secrets
each inflicting multiple slices 
     fracturing the pulse's virtue
splintering a new fragment
to deaden the beat
               the road map of scars
 that lead from the heart...
a long, winding road
 no exits & no viable destiny 



© 2013 Frieda P


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This reminds me of the feelings i have when comes to the feeling of love i have people careless friends, careless lovers, so on and so forth... Maybe there part of the reason why i am the way i am. But as for this writen piece this is the most beautiful piece i have seen you do in a very long time although all your peices are beautiful in there own speical way but this one just Screams to me BEAUTY BEAUTY BEAUTY... Brillient write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Wow Kelsey, thanks.



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"a long, winding road
no exits & no viable destiny" - You said it here yourself Frieda...thoughtless, loathsome, hurting, cheating they maybe but they are all we have and we have to put up with their human failings. We are bled by them yet we live for them. There is no other way to go...no exits!

Very touching!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

'yet we live for them', so weird aren't we, as human beings us all...thanks Divya!
DIVYA

7 Years Ago

Yes Frieda. We are a funny species. :)
This reminds me of the feelings i have when comes to the feeling of love i have people careless friends, careless lovers, so on and so forth... Maybe there part of the reason why i am the way i am. But as for this writen piece this is the most beautiful piece i have seen you do in a very long time although all your peices are beautiful in there own speical way but this one just Screams to me BEAUTY BEAUTY BEAUTY... Brillient write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Wow Kelsey, thanks.

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Added on February 25, 2013
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Tags: scars, lies, cutting names, words

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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