~Rhyme or Reason

You bleed me as a vampire

attack my cerebral vortex 

spiral twisters of your compulsion

devour me to my core frangibility

once drained, 

you 

    start

          all

                over

                      again

from the top one more time

as though a dance of rhythmic seduction

       is it rhyme or reason

         that keeps me addicted to you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jack...]

Now this was hot. The meaning of this poem can be viewed in a few different ways, but the way I choose to view it brings on the heat. I know this feeling, I love being drained by love, I love that desire that keeps me wanting more, the ache that pleads and bends the brain into submission. I love your poem. You, my friend, still amaze me.

[Frieda P]

So happy to hear I've still got it :-)

[redflutterby]

Rhyme or reason... hmm good question! A sensual addiction that leaves you drained but oh so satisfied is a good thing. And you should always start at the top and work your way down...lol. okay I need a cold shower again... ;-ppx

[Jack...]

Damn Red, even your reviews make me sweat. I need to turn on Sesame Street for a while. Damn, I said "turn on". geez, i think you have ruined me. :)>

[Frieda P]

Geez you two, get a room!

[Sami Khalil]

I like the form and the poem. Like cascading with hurt and pain in a cycle but ends up on a good note...Well done...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie Mille Sami :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)