~Moonlight Sonata To the Boudoir~

Speak to me in tender hushes of Chantilly lace

and the scent of black orchids in reason

wrap around my every sense so I might beg of thee,

take my hand gently and promenade me

for this dance of gentle embers burning

will surely swoon and seductively entice me

within the nectar of your tongue

and your refined humble graciousness

doth be kind my sweet,  feel mine luster ablaze

thou shan't not be regretful of salvation  

for with such gentlemanly verve of swagger

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir

wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz

hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors

I shall surrender my very soul to thee

on a bed of thorned roses inkind 

plunge me deeply into passion's flower

of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

Author's Note

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

The main difference between you and Beethoven Frieda is that you manage to blow my mind all the time when this is one of the only songs from Beethoven that move me. yes i said it this is my favorite Beethoven song and you are more consistent than him

for this dance of gentle embers burning
will surely swoon and seductively entice me
within the nectar of your tongue
and your refined humble graciousness

....my favorite part of this piece where the climb starts and the poem begins to exceed itself and live up to its potential if i'm being clear..really please tell me if I'm rambling

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir
wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz
hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors
I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

A non other but a totally badass ending that makes the previous my favorite quote from the piece. ties it together so the thought is complete and your intentions are focused instead of scattering themselves in a reader's mind . all in all a poem to be loved. well written, well captured, well done.
per usual

[Frieda P]

Wow Deron, I'm enthralled by your review here, don't know what to say, thanks so much my friend....x

[Rita L. Sev]

A lovely piece with a Shakespearian flair, but you still maintain your unique voice as well. Both cool and hot at the same time!

[Frieda P]

Wow nice to hear Rita, I felt kind of lost writing this one, thanks so much!

[Pryde Foltz]

A beautiful, romantic and well-crafted one, my friend. Oh the redemption found in the arms of a lover.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde, glad you enjoyed.

[lee von cleef]

Ah you have turned the corner,sold out on me. I thought you were the champion, I'd put you up in three events, not now you have embraced serious , (really well I might add), but how can you yodel, clog ,and claw pick a banjo too ? Must be a split personality.Foooking Aaaa !

[Frieda P]

Ha, laughing here, can't yodel, no! Fooking Aaa, saving this review lee!

[lee von cleef]

whatever you do don't Stamp it , it is way too brittle, and will bust into thirty pieces like baby spiders running every where off their mothers broken back. ( and that will scare you , the first time and second. I have done research.)

[Baby Ricochet]

Kind of classic like. Good job Frieda

[Frieda P]

I was hoping for that, thanks Baby.

[Barbara Walker]

Love your syntax! Sounds like the Victorian era...I knew they were hotter than they let on!

[Frieda P]

Haha, I would think so, once they ripped all that clothing off...thanks Barbara!

[shallimarRose]

"I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms"

some very nice lines in this one.. My favorite was the first one.. "speak to me tender in hushed wispers of Chantilly lace" nice.. xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks shallimar, I kind of liked that first line the best too...x

[Keith]

A wonderful piece from another time. Romantic and sensual with a soft seductive flow.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Keith, glad you enjoyed.

[SyberRose]

So classically beautiful...I adore this sensuous,romantic old English theme...and the music...you have out done yourself this time Frieda...Loved it...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Jazzed by your kind words Rose, thanks so much. :-)

[Tom]

Oh my goodness! Shakespeare & Ludwig van Beethoven have not since long passed away, but are alive and well and have united their not so inconsiderable talent to compose this memorable masterpiece!

Stunning Frieda P ! My heart has melted in the shear ecstasy of this delightful invitation before I have even reached the boudoir !

[Frieda P]

Wow Tom, am loving your review, thanks so much!

[Tom]

You are very welcome Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Now if only I could do that in real life....ha! ;-)

[Tom]

Do not underestimate yourself girl !!

[Sami Khalil]

Love in the classic times and a classic masterpiece in our modern times...a spledid poem...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sami, glad you enjoyed. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)