Insidious Lover

you, my insidious temptation

the lover that taunts me

seduces me to acquiescence

my haunting addiction

you, wrap around my senses

absolute cunning & Machiavellian grace

annulled my comprehension

drained my rational mind

took me on your flight of fancy

careless beast of burden

you burn so smoothly, pounce so quickly

knocked my perception off kilter

still, i take you in slowly              methodically

till every inch of you inside me bursts into flames

                                             takes my breath away

 fire lingers  flagrantly brazen

warning my head, warming my loins

I tremble in the delectation of your touch

sigh deeply,              as I plead for surrender

you flip me over again in a rush

my head dizzy from the pleasure

two dirty vodka martinis are more than

                      I can handle as I fade into you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Soft music, flickering candles, moon light reflecting in your eyes, satin skin, jasmine fragrance as soft shears dance with the breeze of the evening, a warm bed, hot passion, chocolate martinis, sweet lips tantalizing, temptations engulfs as the night is young... Just got carried away with the poem and the music. Amazing my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Holy Jack! I like where you took this, now I need a cigarette..............and a cool shower.

[Leslie Philibert]

the font change with seduces me is brillant ; puts the idea or event in the forefront, a shout, a cry, like too the two lines with the spaced phrase ; very good.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Leslie, I was hoping that would work, much appreciate your input...

[Kleio13]

I will refer this to my boyfriend. This is a treat.

[Frieda P]

Ha, let me know how that goes. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

I think I need a drink after reading this... Quite a seductive journey here, Frieda. Love the faded letters in the last lines. :

[Frieda P]

Cheers Rita, thanks so much :-)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm feeling the effects of Jack's comment all the way up here!

Lol, wow...now that's poetry! You must write in this genre more often, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Haha Kelly, heat rises ya know. ;-) Thanks so much, really jazzed you liked this one.....

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow, Frieda... that did something to me! Can't say what, exactly. lol But, that was an intense trip!

[Frieda P]

Hah, well whatever it was I'm glad it was effective, thanks! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

My its getting hot up in here.

[Baby Ricochet]

Check this out. My phone can suddenly speak Spanish. De hecho la prueba de que se puede hacer en tu casa. I have no idea what that says

[Muse]

what the? We need to get this girl more vodka "keep her tanked" it appears this is when she writes best!

[Frieda P]

Haha what a great review 'what the?'....thanks Muse!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Pure unadulterated passion reads like something from a Jackie Collins Novel...move over Jackie.. Fp is in the house... :O)

Loving the title Fp & the music makes this erotic piece come alive... :O)

[Frieda P]

Woo, Jackie Collins she's tough, thanks YB...jazzed you enjoyed. :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Loved it Fp... :O)

[Keith]

Clever piece, bad boy, drugs, alchohol or other? What ever it is, sound like you need to stay away from it.

[Frieda P]

So true, but you know how that goes...thanks Keith.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the spacing, it allows us to sigh a little longer...to take this poem in just a bit more slowly....and savor every word.

[Frieda P]

Thanks jacob, was hoping that would work, wasn't sure about that and the last line, whether to leave it off and up to the reader's imagination, glad you enjoyed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you could have left the last two lines off...but the faded ink effect does work pretty well...

and it is good there..i wouldn't take it out...

it is like an afterthought...but an important one.

[Frieda P]

Thanks again jacob, appreciate your input...