Conquer Effect

Conquer Effect

A Poem by Frieda P

In the restlessness of spirit
in the rustle of my unease
still lies the deceptive devilment
flowing slowly at rapid intensity
pierces the heart, tears open wounds 
mangled bloodstains in your memory
whilst consciousness resists
recollections of entanglements
gone array twisted within the truth
sour words that crippled remain
listen to the contemptuous love notes
blissed with the tinge of scar gray
intricate arguments to contest
a moment of indiscretion's lust
beastly duality of love and hate
this pain shadows my sensibilities
a gossamer spirit & a tainted story
that frivolous fine line that exists
when one is maimed and 
adulterated


© 2013 Frieda P


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This is a sad write Frieda - There is nothing I can do or say that will help the pain you go through everyday but you know that everyone on the cafe is here for you.

A lovely write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


There is an old saying that you never forget the pain...I think they are wrong. Sad but delivered beautifully my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is sad Frieda. I am sorry for your pain and the hurt they gave you. Your poem is amazing as usual.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ron

11 Years Ago

I have a few o them myself. If a hug would help you can have one of mine.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh, thanks so much! :-)
ron

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :) X

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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