Honestly Kidding

it's totally nothing...

These poetic issues are full of antithesis

consistently random at best

no means yes to friendly enemies

personal business is as public opinion

it's all pretty badass, now and then...

an adult child speaks invalid relevance 

the big baby in a dark comedy

mild enthusiasm of a life denied,

constant ambivalence of brief speeches

this chilling fever has risen in acute apathy

of confirmed rumors by current history

equally diverse in the same difference

whilst the walking dead, accept rejection

burning cold in their blind sight

sigh to a clearly ambiguous sad smiley, 

yet everyone generalizes a beautiful disaster,  

odds are even, my head is seriously insane

living deceased what a crime, the future is today

honestly kidding...No comment

Reviews

[David Scott]

It is the nothing that totally matters as well...

Ok, you are in a zone lately. I like how sharp the mind feels behind this write. I do not see any weakness in the write. Every line could be used to launch deep discussions. The mixing of opposites that are meeting again on the other side in the beaker of life.
Amazing write!

[Frieda P]

Yep, seems nothing is always 'something' when you think about it....I like 'in the zone' although it hardly felt that way, thanks so much Scott!

[Jack...]

Funny, everytime someone below said oxymoron, I thought they were talking about me...perhaps they were. I always thought an oxymoron was saying "Oxydol makes me happy because the blue crystals are sad." But maybe not.

This my friend was like watching a ping pong match with one eye closed, the back and forth was wonderful and it helped tune my focus. It seems there is no end to your talent.

P.S. Tell Pryde I gave her a 100 on her review. (oh and I gave you the same score on this poem)

[Frieda P]

Haha funny Jack....and yes please give Pryde 100...she's going to have a canary soon. ;-)

[Angel]

Oh, my! I love this seriously funny piece, with it's cleverly insane use of oxymorons! You are definitely our only choice for best wordplay on the site, in my unbiased opinion! Anyone who doesn't agree with me is clearly confused!!

[Frieda P]

Clearly, I see you can hold your own Angel!

[Angel]

Ha!! Good to know, you sweet little devil!!

[Frieda P]

Ha, there you've gone and done it again!! ;-)

[Abdul Aziz]

There are too many oxymorons for me to quote here! Brilliantly written. Sometimes, while writing oxymoronic statements, we might lose sight of what we really want to say. But you have a firm hold on your subject, and never let it wander beyond where it should. Awesome.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for such a gracious review Abdul...much appreciate your visit.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so many contradictions in life, beautifully displayed in this oxymoronic work of brilliant art.

a statement so profound...and cleverly expressed.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words jacob, always muchly appreciated.

[Rita L. Sev]

There's nothing like an oxymoron to really get your point across. Some people are their own walking contradictions. This is an outstanding piece of wordplay and facetiousness, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Rita!

[Pryde Foltz]

All that is fine as long as you give me a hundred. Bitingly strong write.

[Frieda P]

Ha you and your 100....you got it! ;-)

[ron]

I hope I'm never on your list of people who need to be verbally beaten with an inch of their pen.

[Frieda P]

Ha takes an awful lot ron, believe me, but once you cross the line, duck...ha ;-)

[ron]

Do I need to duck? lol

[Frieda P]

Ha of course not...there was that one thing...lol, kidding. ;-)

[ron]

OH? Quack quack....:) lol.

[Frieda P]

Don't give me any of your quack, *said in my most authoritative mother voice*, if I knew your middle name, I'd have used it...hahah ;-P

[ron]

My middle name is "Duck"...sometimes...lol

[Frieda P]

Haha, me thinks it's smartarse. ;-P

[ron]

Hey how did you know my second middle name...:)

[Rob Santana]

Damn Frieda your vocabulary is kickin like hot sauce. You had me changing pages in my dictionary like a mad professor. Reads like your telling someone off in an intelligent way.

[Frieda P]

Ha I love hot sauce, the hotter the better, thanks Rob, jazzed you enjoyed my mini rant of sorts....