Wing'd Spirit Senryu

~an oldie from a 'survivor site'...

We are an army

of butterfly warriors

~revamping our wings~

Author's Note

This is an older version of one I wrote on a survivor site,
Robbie's warrior Senryu inspired me to republish it here with a reminder
of the strength & courage we pull from others in the camaraderie with
which we share our life turmoils...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Words and photo. Amazing. Thank you dear friend for sharing your outstanding work.
Coyote

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

This is the first time I've heard of the phrase, "Revamping our wings". Very powerful line and I think I can sense a teenage angst behind these words. Haha

Yes we are, and we know, even in silence.... oh dear, I miss you, love you and want you back on here!!!!

- Elisa

[NeiL ArandA]

This is so nice Ms Frieda ...Less is more !

[Barbara Walker]

Love this! The imagery that comes to mind is awesome!

[icelandicblue]

We are deceptive for we are much stronger in mind, body and spirit than we might look.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Guess we all revamp our wings over time, trying to make ourselves stronger and more resilient to life's turmoils. This is a striking poem and the graphic is stunning, too.

[TL Boehm]

amen. I am no butterfly. I wish I was but its not in my DNA. I am a warrior though and I see that strength in you. love this.

[Rosaria_V]

Wow, this was awesome :) So talented

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Let the positivity fly high.
Inspiring senryu.