Wing'd Spirit Senryu

~an oldie from a 'survivor site'...

We are an army

of butterfly warriors

~revamping our wings~

Author's Note

This is an older version of one I wrote on a survivor site,
Robbie's warrior Senryu inspired me to republish it here with a reminder
of the strength & courage we pull from others in the camaraderie with
which we share our life turmoils...

Reviews

[Rebecca Buller]

Splendid! I give you a perfect score, milady:)

[Strider Marcus Jones]

I really dig this poem. Magic. 100/100

[MsJewel]

Rich with imagery and inspiration.
Beautiful writing my friend!

:) Julie

[Brandon]

Indeed an inspiration...:)

[s y e]

This is very inspiring but I've told you before, you're an inspiration to me. :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

inspiring senryu ... a battle cry for sensing hearts ..also; great pics and music .. you do such good work
E.

[Tai Ryens]

Short &' invigorating, you ought to lead a revolution with this senryu.

[Rita L. Sev]

Love this, Frieda! Especially the idea of revamping the wings. There is a lesson for everyone there - always a work in progress...

[Emerald Seas]

Love the sentiment and the picture works well with your words. Carry on warrior princess :)

[kublakhan27]

True beauty....an army of butterfly warriors...revamping our wings...I keep repeating it in my head and it becomes more majestic every time. You have this form mastered my dear. A gorgeous and uplifting piece, and maybe a little defiant in a way ;) But beautiful above all.