Karmic Dessert

Karmic Dessert

A Poem by Frieda P

Is it karma or just desserts
that brings you to this humbling juncture
kneeling in the excrement you imposed on others

© 2013 Frieda P


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Reminds me of the saying "He that stirs the s**t pot should have to lick the spoon." Yep - karma is the one who doles out that dessert... wicked vent, Frieda!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Karma is just the beginning.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


very mind provoking simple words...i think books arent enough to answer this( if it can be answered)

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOVE this.....a rant that puts someone right in their place. What goes around comes around and payback is a b***h.....I hope the person for whom this is intended reads it. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Karma is just desserts...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Life IS a circle... we relive everyday

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ha! That cartoon man has got it coming to him up there! SPLAT! I don't know who peed in your cheerios, but what a way to stick it to em! Ha! Angi~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha, it's an old piss, still lurking about...thanks Angi!
Ouch and how - but undoubtedly justified! Has me smiling, one eyebrow raised questioning, other fluttering with giggles! Not only that, a fine pic to a very fine brief piece of, 'Take that, you swine!' :) (too many exclamation marks!!!!)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Lol, 'take that you swine' exactly!! :-)
emmajoy

10 Years Ago

Grinning.. i can do mean!
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha but you're still so cute when you're doing it! ;-P
Now this one got my ribs cracking. thank you for making me laugh

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Always my pleasure to make you smile Sunshine! :-)
Ah... Maybe just cause and effect, but karma works well enough too.
Funny and true, and a little sad...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Scott, glad you read the humor and the acerbity in this one too....

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Added on October 23, 2013
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Tags: karma, just desserts, just deserts, humbled

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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