Flutter'd Dash

Breath that feels as shards of glass,

kneeling in the dust of vapored stars

fragmented pieces of a forlorn past

abandoned and bereft tracks of soul

haunted in the fear of the night

allusions of a faceless faltered grace

day breaks and tears still tremble

left in the quake of a flutter'd dash 

Author's Note

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

This is exquisite. I agree with BR that first line is outstanding. The whole thing feels of deep pain against a delicate memory.

[Rita L. Sev]

May the tears, and these beautiful words, be cleansing to your soul, Frieda.

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm gonna have to plagerise that first line

[Jack...]

Sadness seems the forecast for these days, hopefully the sun will shine soon and warm your heart.

Still as beautiful as always my sweet friend.

[Angel]

An abject lesson in what we leave behind us....
Come, Frieda...smile for the blessing of people who love you...