Soulless

~an old rant

Perdition falls from your lips in pretty posies 

sanguinary lies woven within embellished fairy tale

they drank the kool~aid of your bastardized  aspersions

it's evil spell cast, hypnotizing the living dead

devil with archangel wings doth pose in velvet idioms

spewing respite in dark undertones of ego's rejection

perusing any that would annihilate acrid truths

peer in the mirror to see the lying heathen lecher

bloody venom dripping from your deceptive sword

in bitterness of jagged tongue's kissass contempt

~hell hath no fury as a soulless man scorned

How did you get to be so unkind?                              

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Lifting those old stones again so we can see what still crawls beneath them. I remember these days...can't say fondly, but they are there. Although some good did come from them.

Amazing Frieda. how you spin tales, bring to the forefront what your mind is feeling, collect us in a group and shout, "Now listen up!!!" Your pen can take on any deceptive sword my friend.

Loved this one Frieda.

[Frieda P]

More like throwing boulders...ha, felt good to release the kraken of sorts. Been simmering in lava for a while, thanks so much Jack!

[Frieda P]

I know you can't hear the music at work but Backstabbers by the O'jays is spinning. ;-)

[Jack...]

They smile in your face, all the time they want to take your place... I can hear it in my head.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I keep saying "don't drink the kool aid "but nobody listens lol..It is true though people can be so cruel sometimes that you have to wonder if they have a soul.

[Frieda P]

I know, right, no good can ever come of kool aid...even that pitcher is maniacal looking haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes that is true.Damn kool aid drinking cavemen lol

[Frieda P]

The back stabbers music is good though, you can dance to it haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes it really is very good music to dance to so let's have at it :)

[kublakhan27]

I didn't think I was going to have the mental strength required to leave any reviews today, then I came across this one and, well, I guess one could say I never met a diatribe I didn't like. You have your own style for each emotion in your creative repertoire, yet they are all unmistakably you. I can say little else because you've said it all for me here Mrs.R...I often wish my reviewing skills were not so weak, but you always know what I mean...it's another winner love ;) xo

[Frieda P]

That makes it even more special Benji...and how can you say that, I adore your reviews, they're among my favorites. Thanks so much, you brought a smile to Mrs R's heart, as always my friend. ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

I am smiling in turn Mrs.R...anytime I can bring a smile to your face or your heart, I am thankful for a day that could have been worse. It is my pleasure as always ;) xo

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The fretful mess of social inebriates that's how, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

I knew you'd have the answers Thomas, thanks.

[Pryde Foltz]

~hell hath no fury as a soulless man scorned


How did you get to be so unkind?

How indeed. I think it is a choice; one that eventually catches up to you.

[Frieda P]

I'm sure it's a choice, not sure it catches up to them though, thanks Pryde.

[Lyn Anderson]

My friend, this is amazing. You express even the coldest thoughts so eloquently. I feel like an elephant in a China shop next to your delicate offerings. Love it.

[Frieda P]

Wow, you just blew me away my friend...

[s y e]

I've written a story called Soulless so your title dragged me in for sure ~ this was amazing, you have a powerful quill here Frifri, that's for damn sure. I loved this.

[Frieda P]

Oh geez, we're on the same wavelength, woe is you luv....thanks so much noodlebumble, you know where this one came from!

[s y e]

I know exactly where it came from....... Loved it as per.

[Frieda P]

Yep ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Wow...a solid stream of venom...
I'd hate to be this guy..get the feeling hell is waiting for him..!!!!
Well written but spooky in a way.
Please tell me this isn't about me..lOL
Scott

[Frieda P]

Hahaha felt good, if the shoe fits...kidding, wolves don't back-stab they bite! ;-)

[Scott Metro]

...and don't forget that sugar cheeks.....
S.

[Frieda P]

Can a cheeky monkey even have sugar cheeks? ..........

[Scott Metro]

sure...best kind..stamped USDA prime...lol

[Frieda P]

Hahahahaha, you have all the answers..................

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty Wolf