~ Whisper'd Longings A'flutter

COLLABORATION ~ Jack & Frieda

My wanton heart fills my days within mist'd azure

flowing upon seas's of butterfly's lustful dance

shameless abandon of my licentious soul's abundance

Sunlight shimmerings confess dawning desires

Awash o’er wings of cobalt flutter’d fantasie

Singing sonnets of bliss painted mornings

Nimble movements nakedness in nature's eternal joys 

prances about euphoria's smoldering emotions

sentiments set to melodious twinklings of fiery embers

Ecstasy illumines floating whisper'd longings

dreams of feather'd fingers intoxicated yearnings

forever awakened by the essence that is you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Angel]

Oh...you two write so beautifully together! And you chose one of my very favorite songs...I've been known to sing the chorus to this while washing dishes or folding laundry...this and "Oh darling, please believe me...I'll never do you no harm...
Hey, I'm old, what did you expect??

[Frieda P]

Thanks Angel, this was my sister's favorite song too, glad you enjoyed!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much sweet Angel. Thanks for stopping by our world for a visit.

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh! Such a stunning romantic write, Frieda. Gotta listen to those whispered longings sometimes....they know of where they speak! :) This one is a keeper. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

So nice to see you back Lydiky, you've been missed my friend! Thanks so much, have to give Jack credit here too, he found the lovely graphic that inspired us.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lydi.

[Brittany Zedalis]

You two have produced yet another wonderful poem. :]

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed Brittany :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Brittany for your kindness to us.

[BlackRose]

Floating in the air angelicly, I'm swept away. Did you mean fantasies? If it's without the 's' was intentional, it works wonderfully here. Beeeautiful. Thanks Jack for sending me here.

[Frieda P]

Thanks BlackRose glad you enjoy'd our collaboration, I'll let him answer that, it's his luverly stanza.

[BlackRose]

Your very welcome. I very much enjoy'd it. And luverly it is. ;o)

[BlackRose]

Nothing wrong with thinking and writing outside the box, ha. :o)

[Jack...]

I saw the spelling error but I liked the way it looked BR. And it still pronounced the same...poetic license and all of that. Thanks so much my friend.

[BlackRose]

Yep, with poerty (one the reasons why I love to write) you can't really be wrong. Hence why there is all kinds of poerty. It made that word a bit more softer in this case blending beautifully with the rest. Something I would have also done and some words I have done similarly long the lines as you can see or will see more of in some of my poetry.

[BlackRose]

And your very welcome my friend. :o)

[BlackRose]

This came to mine, ha. Litty ditty about Jack and Frieda's magic hands. Two poetic kids growing up in the 'heart' land. Jack is going to be a poetry star. With Frieda right along side on par.... hmmm... poerty in the works? ha. ;o)

[Jack...]

Oh yeah, life goes on....

[Frieda P]

I'm just going along for the ride ;-)

[BlackRose]

Long after the thrill as not gone... ...in pride they walk on...

[BlackRose]

By all means, ride along, ha.This came right to mind wilst having fun with it, you guys penned in it. ;o)

[Emma Grace Tennyson]

"Forever awakening the essence that is you"

Perfect. :)

[Frieda P]

That's Jack line, thanks for your review :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Emma. Happy you enjoyed this.

[Sami Khalil]

Those dawning desires are shimmering in your words, those painted mornings are awaiting your blissful dews and the lustful dances are abandoning their fear of darkness...A great collaboration...:)................

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sami, glad you enjoyed :-)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)............................

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami......

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).................

[Lyn Anderson]

Sensual and romantic, you two are really good at this collaboration thing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, Jack found the graphic and told me to write it, we decided on a collaboration, jazz'd you enjoyed. That was my sister's favorite song too by the way...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much KL. Yep, saw the picture and immediately thought of Frieda. I got lucky that she asked me to write it with her.