Jazz'd brilliance ~

Poetry's Bliss

Jazz me with your brilliance.

take me on a magic carpet ride

trip the light fantastic with your moves

script a rant or wax poetic

as long as there's passion,

blissful harmony of wine, wildflowers & song

intoxication of rapturous conjugation,

words set to reason, rhythm and rhyme

meditations, observations, consternations,

highlights of synchronized times of our lives

allure of history's past, present and future 

poetry is the spice of life, let it shine

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This was quite the elegant portrayal of poetry itself and the way it dances within each soul uniquely, differently, never perfectly in tune with another although two might be similar. I also relish the way you speak of the various tones of poetry, and mentioning how it could be written of the past, present, or future depending on the poet. Intriguing, I must say. That last line was killer as well!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed this one Tai.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

beautiful and full of passion and life...great job!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly, jazz'd you enjoyed!

[Vidya Bacchus]

I love this poem But you wrote it so it stands to reason.There I am being syrupy sweet again lol

[Frieda P]

Oh my, now you're really starting to worry me pazzo....ha GRAZIE!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha chica funny funny.You are welcome :)

[Praveeta]

Lovely write as always. Greatly enjoyed.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Praveeta, glad you enjoyed this one.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Angel]

Whoa...that almost rhymed!

Just kidding, Sweetie...I love it. As usual, it overflows with the passion that is Frieda...

[Frieda P]

Ha smartypants! Jazz'd you enjoyed Diavlo, oops I meant Angel. ;-)

[Angel]

Can't you see these innocent eyes? These are not my smart pants...just some old sweats I wear around the house.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like my crankypants. ;-)

[Angel]

They're more like my lazypants...

[Rene Velez]

Nice word choices here, it uplifts then lets go, well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly for your visit and review Rene.

[Mockingbird]

an excellent poem that is a tribute to poetry and to what it aspires to. beautiful orchestra of words.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Mockingbird...

[N!LoC]

take me on a magic carpet ride.... i immidiately thought of alladin ! lol

[Frieda P]

Whatever ride your little heart desires N!LoC ;-)

[MsJewel]

..and your poetry is all that and then some Frieda. Let it shine my friend...let it shine!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Julie! :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

And you certainly let it shine so brightly from your pen, Frieda! Love this - thanks for the smile!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Rita!