Evanescent moments~

run with the wild horses....

Nourish my spirit, burn my loins from within

   take me to that place I've never been

     free my innermost gratifying

                        flights of reverie

leaping in recklessly with wind's abandon,

  let's do that frenzied tango that lover's do

    if only for an evanescent night's embrace,

                    or a million years

moments are feverishly fleeting

                 as dark drapes are drawn

     you may not know me in the light of dawn 

swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution

         don't let me sway away like wild horses

Author's Note

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Another charming write Frieda...I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly. Obviously your pen runneth over...sometimes mine come and don't seem to stop and then nothing for a time. Bottle whatever that is you drinking and send me some please.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Shirlena, it tries to keep up with my brain I guess, you wouldn't want to share that mess.

[WILDERNESS]

you have mastered the art.................on paper,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so sensual poetry

[Frieda P]

You humble me sir, thanks muchly.......

[MsJewel]

A sizzling and sensual little treat Frieda. Your talent never ceases to amaze me.

100/100 wild horses

[Frieda P]

Woo I don't know if I can handle that many Julie, ;-) Grazie for you sweet words my friend.

[Devesh]

I'm too young for this, William! xD Good job! :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I forgot you're the lolli-pop kid ;-) Grazie!

[Devesh]

Di niente :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Loved this one hun...and the music, beautiful...can I join you :) x

[Frieda P]

But of course, can you ride bare back? ha ;-) x

[Tina Louise UK]

I shall give it a good bloody try lol

[Frieda P]

Haha I'm bloody sure you would ;-) x

[Tai Ryens]

So many sexual innuendos . . . Clever, I must say. Well done!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Tai, jazz'd you enjoyed!

[K.N. Lorenzen]

"leaping in recklessly with wind's abandon"
"swift exits cause for scarlet dissolution"
Another great write, with the trademark of your delicate, sensual pen. The above listed, are my favorite lines. "Scarlet dissolution" is one "tasty" image :) The final stanza (and the youtube-horse;)) reminded me of a wonderful Portishead song. Thank you for the word-flowers :)

K.

Wild, white horses
They will take me away
And the tenderness I feel
Will send the dark underneath
Will I follow? - Portishead "The Rip"

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance to your review, thanks muchly K!

[Lyn Anderson]

Wild horses and wild women woo hoo -- don't shoot this horse when I say, there might not need to be an apostrophe on the lover's ...:)

[Frieda P]

Oh gawd! Ha...I'm sure you're right without me even giving it a second glance you pain ;P

[m.s.early]

Precious and tender words draw a sweet yet powerful piece of desire.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille xavier.

[s y e]

Oh wow, how I missed reading you and it's only been two days. You blew me away with this one. Such a wild but interesting piece. I think she would definitely live the moment when we are in it. Seize it actually. :-) Lovely piece.

// leaping in recklessly with wind's abandon,
let's do that frenzied tango that lover's do
if only for an evanescent night's embrace, //

You blew me away to the other side of the world with these lines. x

[Frieda P]

You keep blowing my way, when you gonna arrive in joisey is what I want to know, thanks noodlebubumble, always love your reviews sweetie. x

[kublakhan27]

This is certainly a teaser of a poem you've offered up Mrs.R...you may not know me in the light of dawn? I'll cross that bridge when I come to it, hopefully not for a million years ;) There is much mystery in this piece as well...even though I'm confident in knowing about that place you've never been, I've only really heard of it...I've never actually been there either so that is something for the reader to consider haha That frenzied tango...I'm "considering" that line a lot too ;) All in all, there couldn't be a better animal metaphor than horses...maybe they inspired the poem themselves...whatever the order, the connection is perfect, as is this and every other poem you write :) xo

[Frieda P]

Yes one can only hope, now where are those fierce horses at? ;-) Thanks for this wild review, frenzied tango requires much stamina by the way hah ;-) Grazie Benji. xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I won't worry about the stamina till I have to either ;) Always a pleasure Mrs.R...xo