Moonglow's perceptions ~

I paused longingly 

    in your haunting metaphors

in phases of moonglow's perceptions

 under enticing whispers of glint'd skies,

          a calm filled of scorch'd shudders

   & twilight's blossomed delusions

       under the influence of divine cravings,

                 breaths of magnolia's sighs

   uttered in shades of nightfall, 

         dreams aspiring of

               scented reminisces  

                                  to soar once more 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

This poem this morning is so very calm and soothing...on my drive in this morning the almost full moon kept me company...if only I had taken the time to pause under it and listen, I am more than certain I could have heard your beautiful words on the cool morning breeze.

I am enchanted by this poem today. Another wonderful amazing piece from your pen Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Very charming response Jack, thanks so much, always love reading your poetic reviews.

[redflutterby]

Theres just something about the moon and all its romantic mystery. You found all the right words to transport the reader to soar once more. My favorite line is "breaths of magnolia's sighs". Lovely thoughts here hun...

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Red, I rather like that line myself. ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Another great verse from your apostroph'd pen.

[Frieda P]

Ha I need new pens eh?

[kublakhan27]

Ah that sonata...funny thing is I can't listen to it now without thinking of Leonard's creepy robot version ;P

Seriously though, I feel like your poetry is meant to be read laying in a dewy meadow, the damp feathers of grass tickling your back, and eyes to the sky, with just enough moonlight to afford the shadows necessary to access your immaculate world of words. Your poetry is a passport to a secret society where your senses are taken at the door, and it is up to you to find yourself in the plethora of moods and metaphors and mental landscapes...and maybe you'll wake up in that same dewy meadow, knowing you've been given access to a dream, and conscious of the fact that your mind and heart have been touched by a muse...and I haven't even mentioned the physical landscapes ;) Twilight's blossomed delusions are never more tempting than when they come from your fingers Mrs.R...xo

[Frieda P]

Holy twilight Benji, I like your review muchly better than my poem here! You took me to another place, I really love your delusions my sweet friend. :-) xo And what crazy reboot, I'm not sure I know that one....

[kublakhan27]

Haha Well that's what your poetry does Mrs.R, even the ones you don't believe would do it ;)

Haha I played it for you once a while back...it's called The Great Event and you were unconvinced it was him ;P xo

[Frieda P]

Oooh that one...yeah still am. ;-) My Leo doesn't do that stuff....ha You need to write those dewy meadows and shadows of immaculate words hon, just saying Benji. ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha If you're wondering how I could ever get crossed up with Dali, go back and read some of your Leo's 50s-60s poetry...it just might have started there ;) Haha No that's your domain love...my domain is buried in the snow somewhere ;P xo

[Frieda P]

Oh I'm quite sure you can put your Dali twist on it and it'd hardly be recognizable as dewy. hahaI know, I think the man definitely got better with age, there's still hope for us! ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I have a theory on why he got better with age, but it doesn't give me a whole lot of hope ;P xo

[Frieda P]

Yeah sex, booze, drugs and rock n roll, then he found the meaning of life in some monastery....who knew? ;-)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

"breaths of magnolia's sighs
uttered in shades of nightfall,"

This line is breath taking... Absolutely beautiful piece!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much K, jazz'd you enjoyed!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So beautiful yet sad and Breathtaking. nice write. Blessings

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much KindredPoet, appreciated your kind words.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

I feel all sweep away now in a divine moment:))))))))))))))))))))) awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:))))))))))))

[Frieda P]

Woo that sounds good to me Jon, grazie mille my friend :-)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Welcome smilesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

[Sami Khalil]

I'm sighing in magnolia's perceptions and breathing in moonlight's inceptions...Excellent...:)...........

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sami :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Sei il benvenuto. tempo Ant

[Scott Metro]

Lovely words...woven well..!
Gentle illusions...

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Frieda P]

I was having a moment, thanks muchly Scott.

[Scott Metro]

Good job..
Scotty

[Mel Lisa]

absolutely beautiful. such transcending imageries! I am enjoying all the beauty in your expressions. lovely piece again!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Melecia!

[Relic]

The scene is serene and thoughtful. With words like moon glow, twilight and nightfall, I'm coaxed into seeing a woman by the in the garden or by the window quietly contemplating while the smell of magnolia's drift through air. The music helps to set a nice ethereal scene you've painted here Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Relic, so nice to see you back here, stick around will ya? :-)

[Relic]

You're welcome. I'll see.