tunnel vision's delusions

Essentially oblivious

 hiding in private vacuums

seeking to catch

 the next tripping bubble

bursting at the seams

  in austerity's realm

out of conjugated burbles 

   mind's sleight of hand

tangents in high def

 spider monkey web'd deception

blindfold'd in pink's pristine

 peaceful illusion'd crack clouds

pips on crackerjack'd

  overload's systems switch

spinning round inside

   tunnel vision's delusions

tied-dyed confusion midst

  magic garden's 

  upheaval of intrusions

coffee perking over 

  a dark horizon's bluff

semi-consciously bliss'd 

 in information's overdrive

rotations quietude

 flipping birds of paradise 

woke up on the wrong side 

  of inventory 

glow lights of night  

   dark umber'd news

 of half past 

    comfortably numb  

riding out the storm

   without oar's directives

satisfyingly unaware

   for all infinity & beyon

d...  

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Well dayum, girl. There is so much in this poem that it practically jumps out at me, shouts boo, then runs away... if you think I am chasing it then you got another thing coming because one; I'm too slow and secondly, I am awe-struck. Ha. I loved this soooooooo much!!!!

[Frieda P]

It came out of a discussion with Benji, so yeah, you knew it'd be obtuse & abstruse, our conversations always are. haha Thanks for your input sweet pea! xo

[s y e]

Ha, I should have guessed that! ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

I know, right? Silly you....... ;P Oh sheesh, your confuzzelment is Featured hah ;)

[s y e]

Oh deary me, that is embarrassment. Trust them to feature it when I was confuzzled, ha! Just great....

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Type of poetry I must read twice to ensure I caught everything. So many lines stood out in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, means a lot.

[Tina Louise UK]

Why do I always feel like I've been smacked upside the head with a dictionary when I read you lol...you leave my brain confuddled haha...I think I got it though...good one hun :) x

[Frieda P]

Haha we're slap happy in joisey, sowwie if that hurt. ;) x

[Lyn Anderson]

Me fave is wrong side of inventory -- dripping in sarcasm, wit, dry humour, this one is a gem.

[Frieda P]

Ha I was hoping you'd read this one...knew you'd get it. Thanks muchly...

[Sami Khalil]

Tunnel vision are people who are on a narrow mission that miss the totality of life and love. They are really austere in their thoughts and imaginations. A wonderful write and the song is great...:)............

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sami, sometimes it's easier to go through life with blinders on....! Muchly appreciate your thoughts. :)

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)................

[Frieda P]

No it's not really, just saying ha ;P

[Sami Khalil]

:)..............................

[redflutterby]

One of my favorite Zeppelin songs. The music fits this morning perfectly. Theres a lot going on in this poem...and my brains not functioning yet. But you left your signature style all over this one. Amazing...

[Frieda P]

Ha your morning or mine?! Thanks, hopefully the brain function comes back soon but by the looks of your last red read, you had all your senses intact dearie! ;-) Just saying.......

[redflutterby]

Mine actually...but if the song fits...you know! My mind is on quiet contemplation mode at this point. Which is never a good thing!

[Frieda P]

Oh yikes that's never ever a good thang!

Before I slam you
Get your duckies in a row
or you'll see Red blow!

[redflutterby]

Lol..youre funny...ha

[Frieda P]

Funny like a honey badger? ;-)

[redflutterby]

Like a rabid honey badger....maybe two! ;-p

[Frieda P]

Haha not sure that's too funny hunny! ;P

[redflutterby]

Well I am kind of a b***h...we have our own sense of humor...lol