Sorrow

Today my sorrow came as usual,
followed by a hollow sound.

Tears fell hard like rain drops,
shattering the ground.

Thunderous cries came from my soul,
escaping all around.

Where are the winds that bring change?
solace cannot be found.

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

So simple and so very expressively written. I loved this poem.

[Daytonight]

So very hauntingly beautiful even through its sadness. Well penned! Keep up the great work!

[Ruth]

This is something I can relate to...beautifully expressed and shadowed :) xx

[BrynnaW.]

So sad and beautiful at the same time! I really liked this. It brings an image to my mind. Sometimes, something goes wrong and we wonder when it's going to change and sadly, sometimes, it never changes. Good job! Keep on writing!