Bilateral Body Symmetry

Bilateral Body Symmetry

A Story by H
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i once was a face sucking cephalopod from the depths of neptune. i discovered that my neptunian ideals are frowned upon here. the earth race found my tentacles and my speckled skin revolting. i became instead, a human girl of seventeen, with soft lips and golden hair. they do not scream now when they see me but i still suck faces. 

© 2011 H


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{ based on a true story }

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Impressive writing...I can't figure out which emotion to feel, these few words are so full. Should I laugh, cry or feel awe? I feel sympathy...I wish humans would accept the neptunian for what she is...isn't that how it should be.

Posted 12 Years Ago


(you say you don't care much for poetry, but that was really poetic) shh

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol i am sitting next to you as i write this. this is really funny. at the same time it is also sad. it's short, obvs, but really too the point.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 11, 2009
Last Updated on April 5, 2011
Tags: octopus, neptune, romance

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New York City, NY



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