PLEASE SMILE

PAIN AND ITS EFFECTS

Raised on wounds and harm,
until ,joy was lost from her life.
Pain reached here and there
grasping desire, swinging with it to the end.


As she walks around...
together ,with her deadly charm
victims started to fall
responding for what she asks for!
That all their hearts will be destroyed.

Instead of makeup she used their blood

Instead of love she only give a fierce eye

Wondering if i can hold or not
she asked friends of mine
"What level of love can he reach?"
All agreed that my level is high to be achieved
"If it wasn't for the missing of a smile from your scene
i wouldn't write this appeal

My dear..

Only true love will heal your pain

My dear

Only honest care will bring joy again

Author's Note

I wrote it to the I CHALLENGE YOU contest, in that contest they have post the pic of a weird female so ,please look at the pic before placing your reviews then judge

Reviews

[Lily]

I really like this, I get a strong feel of 'her', and how she used the people who loved her. But the sensitive approach at the end really pulls it together- acute observation of a human being. Pain breeds pain. I liked the line "Instead of makeup she used their blood".

[highthought]

its hard but i try to do it and that is to give solution for the problem spoken about in the topic of each poem that i write even if it divert the personality of that female....

[highthought]

thank you lily

[dreaming dame]

:) Good stuff:) I looked at the pic before I read the poem, and it must have taken talent to put that make up on her:) Enjoyed.

[Invisible_Ninja]

This is really good, well written and captures the emotions perfectly

[Walk away slow poet]

I like this write, found it quite wonderful and amazing!

[crystal]

i really enjoyed reading this poem . i like it =)

[Black]

responding for what she ask for!
Is responding for what she asks for.

further i love te poem
thanks for sharing

[Cassiopia Summers]

The story within this is truly heartfelt. It is hard to love again once one has been hurt, as it is also hard to trust. Good write.

[Sher{alynn} Veron{ica}]

There's a weird female in every woman, good write.

[Roxi L]

Very inspiring. Really makes you think of people who are like this and maybe you want to help them. Great write.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Sabrina Demartini]

A very good write, i enjoyed reading this(: