There is a lot to like here. A few grammatical errors get in the way for me. (All your apostrophes are missing, but perhaps they don't appear on your keyboard.)
Till I reach to imagine your face's sweetness
Until I imagine your face's sweetness
... is better grammatically, is almost the same length, and ends with -ness like previous lines.
Until I imagine the sweetness of your face
It's the same length, but I think it flows better and closes the stanza without the -ness.
The inside strengths started to come
Replace "inside" with "inner." In the next line I would change "till" to "as" and drop the redundant "the". You would have to change "started" to "starts" or "begins" to keep the tense consistent. I think the last line should read:
if you hadn't once been around
... again for tense and clear word order.
Finally, the middle stanza is problematic. I think you have the same problem here that you had in Wave & Sea (pt 2). You know what you want to say, but not the right words.
You need a single word for "mean hints" and "hated faces in front." I'm not sure what you mean, so I can't help you much there, especially in the latter.
I rest,with your thought at head
settled and calm
Firstly, you don't need that comma. Perhaps you should say:
I rest with thoughts of you on my mind,
settled and calm
or perhaps.
With thoughts of you, I rest,
settled and calm
I probably like the second one more, but that's my proclivity for succinctness in poetry (as opposed to reviews). Both work for me.
Oh my... this has the iridescence of death in a waste-bitten world of sad underthoughts. It pulls at the strings of the spleen and never lets go. Hard to carry on in every way indeed.
I could feel the internal struggle in the poem. Sometime we must learn pain and lost to find the right path. I did like the ending. Struggle teaches us to be kinder and wiser. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Wow..... This blew me away. I felt the longing deep inside. The way you weaved this into something that can actually take one's breath away, I felt myself sigh deep inside as I neared the ending line. Always felt your pieces, this one, I felt tears.
It read like a song to me.. soft and yet full of emotion.. Love does to much too us and so much for us.. whether we survive or not is up to us and our daily choices :) xo
Ok i am a male , English is my second language, so it's hard for me to give a fair review sometimes, so dont expect a lot..
i am a sales manager and, had this attraction to writing more..