Play Sand

Let's see If I can pull you out of your agony

PLAY SAND

I am sure,

You are crying in your car,

So should I drive you to place so far,

Then take out a napkin wipe your cheeks and try to bring you down at par...                                                          

I don’t want to see those misty eyes,

It makes me nervous,

So stop for a while,

And look at those beautiful flies...  

 

I won’t hesitate holding your hand,

Will kiss you and then play sand,              

Slip a little down where I could tickle,  

Will take my time and promise won’t fickle...  

 

That’s your god- forsaken right to get love,

And I won’t let you run I am your true cove,

I bet you won’t find a one like me,

If you don’t believe go out there and See...

Can't u see what you mean to me,

Call me fake I'll let you go free...  

My love for you ain’t a fairy tale,

This is a real life and I won’t let us fail...

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

This is such a beautiful poem filled with promises...
Promise that a man can make for the women he loves.
Women who can feel so much of comfort in his world through his words.
Its great to see you writing like this...:)

Ma Favorite stanza is
"That’s your god- forsaken right to get love,
And I won’t let you run I am your true cove,
I bet you won’t find a one like me,
If you don’t believe go out there and See..."

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you for such a kind review mary :)

[Mary Christabel George]

welcome Gaurav

[Gaurav Walia]

Do you also like reading stories ? I'm gonna upload first chapter of the very first story i've written.. :D Hope you like it

[Mary Christabel George]

Yes I would love to go through it dear...:)

[Gaurav Walia]

:D

[Prritiy]

loved this love write of yours, a promise made by a true, caring heart in a nice way.

[Gaurav Walia]

This is about that special corner you keep reserved for someone special for eternity... Even when you are gone into ashes, the memory of that special one prevails within the wandering soul...
Thank you very much :D

[Prritiy]

yeah, its beautiful.
you are welcome :)

[smilempsn]

I loved how the title of your poem didn't revealed what the piece was all about..
The poem got so many promises.. and many ways to cherish that someone special..

I liked it Gaurav.. ^-^

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank you so much :D

[smilempsn]

ur most welcome..

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah love. It's a many splendid thing.

[Gaurav Walia]

Indeed ,Sir...Thank you so much :D