Best Friend

Best Friend

A Poem by The Official Gary B
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About my best friend in the whole world.. Mary!!

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                        Best Friend

            You are my best friend.

            To me you’re worth more than a Mercedes Benz.

            Or more than anyone can give.

            I can call you anytime and I know you’ll answer.

            I wish you were there for me more,

            But I know you really do care.

            And for the rest of our lives we’ll share.

          I know you love me.

            I know I love you.

            A million words, couldn’t even explain.

            It just wouldn’t be the same…

           Though you are literally insane.

           You are my best friend.

           My best friend.

           My best friend.

 

© 2010 The Official Gary B


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I like this very much. It's very sweet. It's fabulous when we have that one friend we know we can always count on and also be there for in return. Nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A good friend is worst a lot. Few people will do anything for you in a life. I like the poem. A positive poem of appreciation and gratitude. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is good. The beginning starts a tempo which you don't follow. Either change the first two lines or redo the tempo to establish a flow for the reader. My advice would be to change lines two and three. Overall a good piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This write comes across as sweet and most sincere.
It's simple, straight forward and its easy to see it comes right from the heart.
The first two lines, although on the face of it could seem cheap by comparing a friendship to such a commercial object as a car!.....but it somehow served this piece well because clearly, the ideal of owning such a car, is a prize and a great one, but the friendship is even greater again. So, well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


You have a natural talent my friend but like all talents it needs to be nurtured
Inspiaration is required but also perspiration caused by the sheer effort of mastering your chosen field of endeavour

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sweet =)
Loved it. Funny and uplifting.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh! This is beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow I really liked that poem it was great! I liked the part where it said "THough you are literally insane" lol it was sweet and funny. Thank you for sharing this with me

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow thanx gar:) good poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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