I like this a lot. Maybe because I know there is a large portion of our population that have no idea who Eris was or what Erisian/Law of fives refers to. You were able to weave so much into such a condensed poem.Very nicely done.
Kenneth The Poet is an optimist wrapped in the candy shell of moroseness and cynicism. He lives between the two parallels marked 46 and 49, all while living in the state marked 39. He pretends that he.. more..