Crash, Crash, Crash

Crash, crash, crash,
can't establish any connection!

Like a bad first date,
only over and over again.

I'm f*****g addicted to you
when I go to your address,
yet I'm blocked because
you're never there.

You're a fickle mistress
when the electron flow fails.

Author's Note

My love/hate letter to WC.

Reviews

[Priyanka Natesh]

Oh wow... That lashes out!

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

It has an "indie" feel to it.

[Ramblings of a Mediocre..]

Haha. This totally happens to me.

[Jeremy Baker]

I can so easily relate!

[SkinlessFrank]

My brain freezes up too when this happens. Like one of those electroshock zaps.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oh wickedly submerged in the wild tides of pixel rides~ clever and concise with fair share of snarky dipped in glazed frustration and powdered sugar angst~

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I adore this. I know exactly what you mean, I almost know the code by heart that comes up about exhausted bytes...........:)

[Don Shaw]

Great work and expression of the frustration involved when dealing with inanimate objects. Remember dial up hahahaha ?

[Margarette]

I totally agree with you. I hate having a slow connection when directed to this site or the time when my connection resets itself. It's good to have addiction on reading and writing. Although it eats up some of my working time, I am always happy when I read pieces written by authors or when I have finished a certain poem. This site was made because of aspiring writers like us and I am grateful that it continues to be what it has been up until now.

[Thea]

Aw...This happens to me really often! Haha! Nice poem...Obviously, everyone can relate to it! Great work! :)))