FEEL IT COMING

CAN YOU?

The days are not as crisp in the mornings,

Sky, not nearly as clean as that first Spring day,

.

The Mockingbirds' playful jabs at one another

become as hateful as their intimidating songs.

.

We don't sit as closely and we keep our talks at minimum

as if each breath we covet will somehow lower the heat.

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

Final line is a treat. I like it.

[ETERNITY]

Thanks for your input (;

[Buddhistboy73]

Interesting write here Eternity...

Sounds like the end of something that is coming here....
This is my favourite line as it's quite visual...

The Mockingbirds' playful jabs at one another

BB73

[ETERNITY]

Soon will see that behavior in people. Thanks (;