The Poem of My Life

The Poem of My Life

A Poem by gentlebreeze13
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it is actually a common thing that happened to marriages but to me it is what happened

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The Poem of My life

 

Every time I look up above

I see how big the world is

And the chance of meeting

The person I wish to be with me

Seems like the vastness

Of the sky above!

 

And yet, here you are!

 Gazing into my eyes,

Telling me “Hey I’m here now,”

Smiling and very comforting.

From then on our love story set forth.

‘twas like a dream coming true!

 

We live life together happily

You seem not to know to say no

To my wants and cravings then,

I thought it was just your good nature

Until changes start to breeze in

That shaken a little my comfort zone!

 

We started to argue a lot!

Your “yes” before becomes “no” now.

Tears kept  rolling on my cheek

Every time I thought how different you are now!

Never thought it will happen

Since you promise to love me forever!

 

Now, I am still learning

What love really is!

Is it to stay for the sake of your love ones

Or to give each other a break

And hurt the people

Who wish to grow both in your love!

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 gentlebreeze13


Author's Note

gentlebreeze13
Ii want you to feel free critiquing my work. You can check grammar, the rhyming, the style...i want to learn them all. Thanks in advance!!!

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thanks a lot for the point and who viewed this poem...i just hope you left me some comments for me to learn about writing.


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gentlebreeze13

Davao, XI, Philippines



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i just found myself recently writing poems and i kind of liking it and in a way it becomes my outlet of letting out what's inside me. more..

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