Untouchable

If I could describe you in one word,
I would choose "untouchable" 
Much like the distant diamond stars.
Untouchable like the hazy sun when its setting,
Fleeting carelessly,
Abandoning me. 
Untouchable like the butterflies that flutter in my stomach when I see you. 

Author's Note

I just came up with this. Tell me what you think! ^.^

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems this has the spoken verse feel to the write for me as a reader...I can hear the voice saying this to the wind...