Do it!

If you want to, just do it.

If you want to go out and explore,
Do it, it's better than being a bore,
And the world's waiting for you to adore,
It's never ending beauty.

If you want to love your partner more,
Do it, to fill their heart's pore,
From your loving and caring heart's chore,
Love them, it's your foremost duty.

If you want to lay and fall asleep,
Do it, dwell into a slumber deep.
Don't care about your phone's beep-beep,
The work can be done later.

If you want to, in your stupid mind keep
Some lovely memories' loads of heap,
Do it, you can later have a peep,
Don't worry about any hater.

If you want to gift someone a ring,
Do it! It may be a costly thing,
But on getting, their heart to you will sing
Songs of thanks and for blessings pray!

If you want to do some nonsense thing,
Do it, God knows what it may bring.
It won't disturb from being a 'king',
Trust me, even I wrote this poem astray!

Author's Note

It may not make sense, but trust me, I really wanted to write something nonsense. So I just...well, did it. Without giving any second thought ;)

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

astray? funny it is, i love astray esp. the cold ones with some ashes of grey.

short. simple. word of mouth. crystal clear & very freely written poetry it is. sometimes, when the heart's being illusioned by the hypnotherapy of hypnotic love - ecstasy, the mind oft. leads spirit to something that's been unchased since 'eons. and it's called: "freedom". I happen to know, love's itself an airport, perhaps, however, also a runway of freedom where even the life sincerely feels so alive. freed. & unshackled by the doom of misery. so I guess, ur poetry's much more like this -- freedom that makes readers feel live alive & nurturing 'em to do what's meant to DO IT. nice imagery here!

[girly]

That's a great review. Thanks a ton! ^_^

[Adam Adams]

looking forward to reading more. if i'm not wrong, u seem to be.. not a regular gal/writer.. are you?

[girly]

Sure. But I'm sorry I didn't understand what you meant by a regular gal/ writer. Could you please tell me what you meant by regular? :/

[Adam Adams]

I mean, how oft. do u write?

[girly]

At least one poem/story in three days, you can say.

[Adam Adams]

nice. so is poetry all whatcha much into? or something else too u enjoy writing?

[girly]

But I don't post 'em all. I just post the ones which I think have some drawback or are incomplete in some sense, so that there's an improvement in them, if possible.
I don't post my best works. Feel awkward in doing so :(

[girly]

Fav's poetry. Otherwise some short stories or screenplays, that's it.

[Adam Adams]

u don't post ur best work? okay.. so no harsh feelings, perhaps, I wonder, do u have any of ur so called best work?
.. cause I just thought whatever u licked in is ur best shot.

[girly]

I'll take it as a compliment, but yes, I do have my best works. And I love them, don't know about any one else!

[Adam Adams]

u r seemed quite an optimistic bimbo. liked ur response!
so would u allow me takin a lil peak/peek at ur so called "best" work? (only if it's okay with u. and if not, I get this).

[girly]

Oh..sure. I need some time, though. To gather up courage to share 'em, you know :)

[Bina]

It's very empowering and I can feel this and see vividly in my mind. This is a real and brave expression

[girly]

Thank you! Glad it's empowering.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

great.......
someone must be bothering you for you opinion........lol.....
that should be the attitude............for most of the things in life.......just going with the flow.........sets sails.........
effectively written......
i really liked it!!!!!
:)

[girly]

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a lot! ^_^

[D]

Yea...There comes a time for dreamers to make their dreams reality, other times to make themselves believe in their dreams...
neither is here for me...
well penned though

[girly]

You're so right. Thank you! ^_^