Masterpiece

Warp and ruin them to your pleasure

Take my thoughts.

Spill them out on a

piece of paper.

 

Use your twisted paintbrushes

to warp and ruin them.

Mold them into

who you wanted me to be.

 

Use your thinnest,

most innocent brush

to fashion them into

letters. and then words.

 

Create your masterpiece.

Let everyone lay their eyes

upon it.

 

This, my friend,

Is how you make

 

Poetry. 

Author's Note

**Inspired by "I'm Better" by Aurora Lynn**

I'm not sure where this one came from. It really doesn't have to do with Aurora's poem. Oh well.
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Reviews

[Aurora Lynn]

Wow, I'm flattered that my poem inspired somebody to write a poem like this! I actually did a double take when I say that this was inspired by "I'm Better". I'm glad that somebody read my poem and wrote soemthing like this because of it.

I really enjoyed reading this poem, and not just because my poem inspired it. My favorite part was "Use your thinnest,/most innocent brush/to fashion them into /letters. and then words." That is how poetry is made, and you followed those steps exactly for this poem. Well done.

~Aurora

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Art and writing is similar in many aspects. Need to have vision and plan to draw or write. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Matthew Kult]

Beautiful flow and outstanding write.

Regards,

Matthew

[halflives]

Aurora Lynn's poem is great, and your poem is a good rival. I liked it. No, in fact, I loved it. Well done ;D

[compositionc]

OMG, Aurora's poem was just amazing. Your poem is very good. It speaks so much truth. Don't we just take letters and then make words that fill our thoughts?

[CharlesMonroe]

I really like this :D and you know what? This inspired me to write a poem I've been dyeing to write just couldn't find the right idea, so thank you :D I love this

[Searching 4 Serenity]

So true.
Sometimes inspiration does end up being the opposite of what you were inspired by.
Your young, witty mind is as cunning as your penning.

[clairvoyantmars]

hmmmm. powerful wording. makes us think. :))

[TJ]

Good metaphor in this one! Beautifully worded