Dead Poem

Dead Poem

A Poem by GlamGirl
"

A murdering spree is happening!

"

Tap tap tap.


The plastic keys on my 


keyboard


move fast.

 

I’m trying to write


a poem.

 

I type about real things.


Love, Music, Experiences, 


People.


My world.


 


The words flow out with


color and life,


Creating a rainbow web


across my computer screen.

 

I finish the poem.


After checking for errors and 


saving,


I close the screen and


shut down the computer.

 

The next day


I come back to that same 


screen.


 


I read over my poem,


but I am too late.

 

The colors and life


have flooded out of it,


leaving a shell of


words and white space.

 

The poem is


DEAD.

 

I have a formal funeral for it.

 

I click on the


DELETE button.

 



Stupid dead poem…

© 2011 GlamGirl


Author's Note

GlamGirl
This is what has been happening to all of my poems recently. (and an excuse for not putting anything up in a while...)

Those stupid poems, they keep on dying on me!

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This one did not die, and a piece of you did not go with it. Those othere were not meant for us to read or for you to see color in but you will get that back I know it because I have read many of your writings and I like all that I read and can see the colr in everyone of them. You have a way with words that many do not posses you will find it again because it did not leave, it only took a sojurne for the moment but it will return. It will come back with a vengance and I for one cannot wiat to read the words that flow fvrom you when it does!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Really dead. Unable to make out a meaning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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