Wendesday five O'clock (Debbie)

an experience of young love

You smile at me when I come in

And I just wan to let go of everything

But instead I ignore you

And stare into the corner

Pretending not to notice you

Sitting there

So perfectly

I shift

Trying not to breath to loudly

Hoping that you will love me

But not knowing how

I pretend to read out of a book on the corner of the table

Trying to avoid eye contact

You get up to leave

And I try to act busy

Waiting for you to finish me

You stop by my chair

Putting  your hand on my shoulder

I shiver

But pretend not to notice you touching me

After a minute  you say good bye and leave

I wait five minutes
go into the bathroom
and slam my head into the wall
until i cant feel you
anymore

Reviews

[Shantel Moore]

wow i really like this. :) i will start readin some of your other works. its sad though. but i can definetly feel the emotions. well done :)