The Accident

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There was my girlfriend,

Walking down the street.

Calling my name

As if dying for me.

She was in the middle of the street

Glancing at me.

She didn't know

I was nervous of her,

Watching me cheating on her.

She let out a tear,

Then looking at me

My name she screamed.

She went down her knees,

Desperately letting out her tears,

When suddenly I

Gave back a scream

Saying nooo.

She didn't know

What I meant  by "no"

So she just kept on kneeling.

She took a look to her side

Watching a car coming down,

But the only thing she did

Was to look at me.

I closed  my eyes,

When I heard the cracking sound

of my girlfriend's bones.

 

 

Author's Note

This is a poem I just made up. Please review it.

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

So sad, powerful, and touching. I enjoyed reading this. Great read.

[K8lyn]

woah. interesting...

[gonzxo]

awesome

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