11.Pulsations

Poem N Video by Pal. The sound of heart beat Thud..thud.. thud.. Vibrating pulse on the wrist; visible living signs. Eat, drink, sleep, procreate; signs of active life. True life is beyond.

 

Pulsations

 

The sound of heart beat

Thud..thud.. thud..

Vibrating pulse on the wrist

All visible living signs

 

Eat, drink, sleep, procreate

Working, making love

Communicating with others

 Clear signs of active life

 

Every thing happen routine like

Structured life experience platform

Creation-existence-destruction

Never end soul journey

 

We are not alone

Many like us move on

Live in harmony at times

Most times live in distress

 

Keep on searching peace

Some sort of balance

For the soul to rest

A deep breath of satisfaction

 

Life is too complex

Many lives we come

Each time still ignorant

As if the journey never ends

 

I don’t dispute Darwin

Human Souls in this body

Understanding oneself in totality

Evolve like anything else in nature

 

Introspection in to myself

Make me perceive

Life is only a matter of pulsations

Positive, negative, neutral

 

Electro-Magnetic excitations

Nerve nodes sensing them up

Complex central nervous station

Processing them pretty fast

 

In fraction of moment

Send back flash signals

Green for positive (+ve)

Red negative (-ve) pulsation

 

Many feel good +ve pulsations

Frown upon unpleasant -ve

Isn’t it funny some time

Reverse become true!

 

Life become complicated

When we start judge

Brand these pulsations

Good or bad  

 

Worse is when 

Some docs like prescriptions

Must do’s and don’ts

Indicating a path to heaven

 

Judgments often stop movement

Clear mark of mental blocks

With guilt, confusion and frustration

A true path towards ignorance

 

Pal

Poem n video by Pal

17.Pulsations

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUC0SnUxMYk

 

 

Poem by Pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

29.Pulsations (КОЛЕБАНИЯ) - in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cuDoC8fcO8

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by Kamelia, Bulgaria

37.Pulsations (Пулсации) - in Bulgarski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oc07PbllTDA

 

Reviews

[DrumMajorPod]

To be honest with you, I was, at first, not enthused about reading a "long" poem (been a long day and I can't focus very well). But I decided to give your poem a try, and I am GLAD I decided to do so! What an excellent piece! Very thought-provoking. It was beautifully written. It managed to capture my interest and hold it. At various points throughout the poem, I found myself thinking about what you were actually saying. You have many philosophical beliefs packed into the poem. Excellent writing!

[PoemRodent]

A very well written piece with nice imagery added

Dostani

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Profound piece with a great message. really enjoyed this piece.

[Jenny Davis]

A very profound piece...there is much that makes the natural 'vibe' of life stop...one being feelings of doubt and guilt...and another being judgement which IS very ignorant...very well said :)

[George Love]

Nicely done, several layers of truth and ideas to make the reader stop and think. Well written, clearly spoken.

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a piece with may layers of truth in it and a lot of valid points when people choose to make judgements they create turmoil that is unnessesary and hurtful in what should be a tranquail place.
You expressed this well and inIn a well thought out write. Nicely Done.

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It's good to be philosophical ... that's how wisdom grows. I think the last stanza stands out, and is well placed in the prose. Best wishes, Bethlynne.

[Marie]

Nicely done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is so deep in meaning just as life is... we all just need to find that meaning and not wast time... Brilliant !!

[Tania Leigh]

I really like the message in this:

"Judgments often stop movement
Clear mark of mental blocks
With guilt, confusion and frustration
A true path towards ignorance"

Well done!

[D.L. Simmons]

it's interesting. i would say that it lacks passion tho and that's what sets poems apart. :)
but it's getting there.